Creative Writing 7)

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LILY, the caretaker's daughter, was literally run off her feet. Hardly has she brought one gentleman into the little pantry behind the office on the ground floor and helped him off with his overcoat than the wheezy hall-door bell clanged again and she had to scamper along the bare hallway to let in another guest. It was well for her she had not to attend to the ladies as well. But Miss Kate and Miss Julia had thought of that and had converted the bathroom upstairs into a ladies' dressing-room. Miss Kate and Miss Julia were there, gossiping and laughing and fussing, walking after each other to the head of the stairs, peering down over the banisters and calling down to Lily to ask her who had come.

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LILY, the caretaker's daughter, was literally run off her feet. She hardly brought one man behind the little pantry, to help him with his coat, next the doorbell clanged and she was off again. It was all well until she had to attend the ladies room as well. Miss Kate and Miss Julia thought of that and made the upstairs bathroom into and dressing room. While in their the girls were chatting, laughing and complaining to each other. They then asked Lily who had come.